Part 12: Bonus - I am a talented author

Disclaimer: Once again, all game images have not been manipulated via Photoshop or GIMP.

I am a talented author.

You guys seem to like my writing and my trip's only like half over! So, since I'm a little depressed about B, I decided to work on my screenplay. Accompanied are portions of my script. Tell me guys what you think and maybe I'll post it in CC. The only thing is, it's unfinished and I'm not sure where to go next.



Photoshopped Storyboard PANELS:





These are more PANELS:



And some more for these scenes:



One more:







I used me and B for these panels since I didn't have more pictures, but I think Ben Affleck should play Vett.



I agree, guys. I think the Whodunit line is the best one. Argh, writer's block again!



PANELS:



What to say next?



Well, I'll try them both and see what fits. Let's see how the second one works.




I dunno. I don't really like Vicki's reaction there. Let's see how the third one fits.




Yeah... I like that one better.







Hmmm... I don't like that one so much. Maybe the yeast line...







Maybe this broad could use an eyesore!




Nah.

Disclaimer: There are no dialogue panels missing in this scene. This is the full text given.

Okay, guys, I think I have my script finished! Let me know what you think!

First I tried the stool pigeon line, but...





So, basically, Vett says the second line about the artificial sheen in her hair, and here's what I'm thinking:





Just right after that, we go to color and BAM!



And then the last thing the audience expects:



And just to keep them on their toes:



But we go back to black and white for the next big scene.




Pretty good, right?

Okay, but next update we're going back to the story of B and I!